The Terrible Trip -Draft 2

Everybody has experiences of taking a trip; nevertheless, seldom do people have a terrible trip. But I did. It was an unforgettable and exciting trip which was our graduate one. That day, we assembled in school, waiting for getting on the buses. Then we heard somebody say the tire was flat. But we didn’t care about that. After 20 minutes, we set off. On our way, we chatted and sang gladly. All at once, the bus had an emergency brake, we shook and yelled. Afterwards, we felt the bus losing balance and out of control. After several seconds, the bus seemed to under of control. We all survived. The driver explained because of the new tire’s traction, if it were customary, we would be dead. This was a quite terrible experience.

A Terrible Trip

Everybody has experience of taking a trip; nevertheless, seldom does people have a terrible trip. But I did.It was an unforgettable and exciting trip which was our graduate one. That day, we assembled in school, waiting for getting on the buses. Then we heard somebody say the tire was flat. But we didn’t care about that. After 20 minutes, we set off. On our way, we chatted and sang gladly. All at once, the bus had a emergency brake, we shook and yelled. Afterwards, we felt the bus losing balance and out of control. After that, the bus seemed to under of control. We all survived. The driver explained because of the new tire’s traction, if it were customary, we would be dead. This was a quite terrible trip.