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Saturday, September 22, 2007

A Dream I Had

The exam was coming. Most of time I was in my room to study. The day I studied as usual. Hastily, I was on the street. Here was nobody, and I felt something was approaching. I was scared and curious what it was. Then appearing at my face was a dinosaur running after me. It was amazing that the dinosaur dreaded of math books. Consequently, I took my book to frighten it. At the time, a car rushed form sky, slamming into me. But I didn’t get hurt. Only did my belly have a hole, presently it rallied. I couldn’t magic what happen to me. There was a voice calling me at distant, the voice was more and more clear. It’s Mom. Suddenly in my presence was dark, I could not see anything. Oops! Actually it was only a dream.

5 Comments:

At 10:48 AM , Blogger 郭包子 said...

a car rushed form sky你要打from齁

I couldn’t magic what happen to me.為什麼happen不用加ed

寫的很不錯啊~你的提示呢?阿龍不是說要寫提示?

 
At 8:41 PM , Blogger 飛奇 said...

"Most of time I was in my room to study."
time前面應該要要加the

寫的還不錯唷~~

 
At 5:22 AM , Blogger 汶汶汶 said...

what happen to me

happen 要加 ed 吧?
奇摩字典都有加耶

There was a voice calling me at distant, the voice was more and more clear.

要用連接詞

It’s Mom
不是只有對自己的兄弟姐妹說才能用mom嗎

 
At 5:22 AM , Blogger 汶汶汶 said...

阿包說什麼提示?

 
At 7:03 AM , Blogger 飛飛飛 said...

* what happen to me -> 要加ed。
* Most of time I was in my room to study -> time 前面要加the。
* a car rushed form sky -> 這句什麼意思? 你要打from嗎?

 

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