A Dream I Had
The exam was coming. Most of time I was in my room to study. The day I studied as usual. Hastily, I was on the street. Here was nobody, and I felt something was approaching. I was scared and curious what it was. Then appearing at my face was a dinosaur running after me. It was amazing that the dinosaur dreaded of math books. Consequently, I took my book to frighten it. At the time, a car rushed form sky, slamming into me. But I didn’t get hurt. Only did my belly have a hole, presently it rallied. I couldn’t magic what happen to me. There was a voice calling me at distant, the voice was more and more clear. It’s Mom. Suddenly in my presence was dark, I could not see anything. Oops! Actually it was only a dream.

5 Comments:
a car rushed form sky你要打from齁
I couldn’t magic what happen to me.為什麼happen不用加ed
寫的很不錯啊~你的提示呢?阿龍不是說要寫提示?
"Most of time I was in my room to study."
time前面應該要要加the
寫的還不錯唷~~
what happen to me
happen 要加 ed 吧?
奇摩字典都有加耶
There was a voice calling me at distant, the voice was more and more clear.
要用連接詞
It’s Mom
不是只有對自己的兄弟姐妹說才能用mom嗎
阿包說什麼提示?
* what happen to me -> 要加ed。
* Most of time I was in my room to study -> time 前面要加the。
* a car rushed form sky -> 這句什麼意思? 你要打from嗎?
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