Computer-Draft One
In the very beginning, computers were used for military purpose. However computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They are a convenient implement for entertainment, such as listening to music, chatting, shopping, and so on. Having such a smart machine, everything is easy to do. We also can look up information which is about travel, news, weather, etc. Only what you need to do is type the words in the search engine. Besides computers are bridges between countries in the world.
Personally, I have liking and dislike for computers.Nothing is perfect. Even a high-technology machine is. In our society, the news about cheating and Internet crime happens again and again. Because you cannot look at person who is in Internet world clearly.But it is certainly that computers bring a more convenient life. Like making friends, being a communication without distance. We cannot prevent the issue which is attached to advantage. Computers are cherished and bothersome.

6 Comments:
in the search engine. 是用in 哦?確定嗎?我要學起來了哦!
Even a high-technology machine is.哇哇~倒裝句呢!拍拍手
恩恩!寫的很好(我眼睛酸了~睏!)
不錯喔~~^_______^
寫的不錯唷~~
不錯耶 !!
I have liking and dislike for computers..
→兩個都有的話,,在have後面加個both吧~
好棒好棒*
實在是不知要改什麼耶~
真的不錯~~
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