Making Decisions-Draft One
Growing up means making my own decisions. It’s also necessary to responsible for my behavior. Therefore, I have to cogitate before doing things. As the old goes “look before you leap.” Besides I should be independent and begin to draw up my own life. The childish age has passed. No more do I depend on others to do anything. I need to select for the things which are in my life. Hence, I ought to begin learning to make decisions for myself.
The hardest decision that I ever made was choosing the college which I wonder to study. I didn’t know advantage of each college that makes me confused. But the choice influences my future a lot. I peruse the general regulations again and again and try to find out the best college for me. However, it is not like a piece of cake. Hence I decide to visit each of the colleges for the purpose of realizing theirs profiles and select ideal school to me.

4 Comments:
ㄜ…可以寫還沒發生的事嗎?
…… to find out the best college for me.我覺得用myself會更好一點
恩!你有越來越好的趨勢
It’s also necessary to responsible for my behavior. →responsible是形容詞喔
第二段後面時態不一致 要過去式才對吧
it is not like a piece of cake.
→like應該不用了
第二段阿..算是現在的事對不對?
那開頭就不要用過去式囉!
I didn’t know advantage of each college that makes me confused.
-->I don't know advantage of each college so that it makes me confused to select to.
那個Hence用了兩次,其中一個可以替換一下
...make decisions for myself.
→by myself.自己做決定,,也可以*
寫的不錯呢_
雖然第一段打的很不符合現實...
You still a 幼稚鬼!XDDDD
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