Translation - Draft One
TV Program
Choosing the TV programs carefully is important. Though it is the most important channel which afford the information and entertainment. It may have some disadvantages. Some programs falling of violence and lust do harm to teenager. Also it will hurt your eyesight to spend too much time watching TV. Therefore, we are supposed to choose helpful TV programs. The most important is not being a couch potato.
A-Mei
20th May
A-Mei showed up the inauguration of president and sang the national anthem. A-Mei’s sound quite stood out in popular singer. Maybe people not figure out why she could be so popular. In fact, her singing would trace its interest back to her childhood. Because she stuck to sing and subsequent struggle. She could carry out her dream. Even though facing failure, she never gave up. No wonder her expression is always worthy of her fans to praise.
posted by ：V，瀞 ”婷* @ 1:53 AM
4 Comments:
...harm to teenager.
→teenager是不是要加個s比較好?
Also it will hurt your eyesight to spend too much time watching TV.
→感覺怪怪的,是不是有,that to...的用法?
falling→是要打full
it will hurt your eyesight to spend too much time watching TV.
→to改if感覺比較順~
The most important is not being a couch potato.
→ being→ not to be 應該也可以
teenager加s
spend要加介系詞on
the most improtant 要不要加thing？
Though it is the most important channel "to" afford the information and entertainment",it" may have some disadvantages.
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