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Sunday, February 25, 2007

Diary-two

February 22
Today is a happy day, due to the barbecue. My family goes to my grandma’s home to barbecue. There are 20 people. Adults ate gambling, and children are playing. One of my cousins is a little boy, he is only six year-old. He is cute and very active. I like playing with him very much. When gambling, we always stay up late. Therefore, my cousins will live in my home. At one sweep, a small house is full of people. Let the new year becomes more noisy and lots of fun. Though, every year we celebrate the new year by the same way , we are not a bit hate it. Because it is our family's convention.

1 Comments:

At 12:02 AM , Blogger GIGI said...

Adults ate gambling, and children are playing.→ ate 改成are

One of my cousins is a little boy,he is only six year-old. →這2句中間用分號

he is only six year-old. →有2種改法
(1)he is six years old. (2)he is a six-year-old boy. →因為six-year-old 是adj. 所以後面要加N.

Because it is our family's convention. →convention改成custom感覺比較好

 

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