My Bedroom-Draft One
I think my bedroom is the most perfect room in the world. Entering my room, the left of the door is a computer that is next to the wardrobe. The window is between the wardrobe and the bed. In the right corner is my bed. More often then not, I take a rest when I come back home. The clock is above the bed. It is a birthday gift that my grandfather bought for me. Next to my bed is the desk where I study. There is a bookcase that is on the right of desk. My favorite rug is in the middle of the room. The picture which is my whole family’s photo is on the wall that on the right of door. This is my room. Is it nice?

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Entering my room, the left of the door.....
left前面加一個on會比較好
寫的不錯耶~!!
The picture which is my whole family’s photo is on the wall that on the right of door.
which 的意思不是用來代表picture的嗎?那family的後面為什麼還要加上一個photo?
是不是應該改成"The picture(or photo) which is my whole family is on the wall that on the right of door.
Not bad.
寫的很不錯~很順喔
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