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Wednesday, December 20, 2006

An Embarrassing Experience-Draft

I have ever met an embarrassing experience that I would not forget. One day, my friend , Sherry and I went to a department store . When we entered the store. She said " I only have 20 dollars, can you lend me your money? " " Of course, we are the best friends." said I . I thought I had enough money to lend her. So , I didn't check my wallet if I had enough money or not. When we at the sales counter, I found I only had about 50 dollars, I put down all products that I wanted to buy in a hurry. All of people looked at me, I felt so embarrassed and bad. The day must was not my day.

5 Comments:

At 7:16 AM , Blogger 郭包子 said...

I have ever met an embarrassing experience that I would not forget.
是不是要用I had?

 
At 10:51 PM , Blogger GIGI said...

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At 5:37 AM , Blogger 飛奇 said...

"All of people looked at me..."
我覺得應該要限定people,專指當場在的那些人,所以加the會比較好

 
At 7:03 AM , Blogger 平井" said...

So, I didn't check wallet if I had enough money or not.我覺得改成
So, I didn't check wallet whether I had enough money or not.會比較好

 
At 11:59 PM , Blogger GIGI said...

" Of course, we are the best friends." said I .
用I said感覺比較順

When we at the sales counter
we和at的中間要加were

 

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